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Stella
1/30/2017 12:51:22 pm
When i grow up i want to be a singer with Kelsee. We have planned it for a while now that when we are 14 or 15 we will go to americas got talent or the voice. We plan to make music together for as long as we want. We want to make it to the finals on one of the shows and win the thing because we watched one of them and that person is now a singer for his life. We also want to make sure we make good music and nobody will think it is horrible. That is how i will make it possible and what my career will be when i grow up.
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kelsee
1/30/2017 03:48:28 pm
good job :)
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Kelsee
1/30/2017 03:48:03 pm
When i grow up i want to be a singer with stella. One of my goal is to get on the voice with stella. We have been writing songs for a while and we want to go on stage when we are 14 or 15. Another goal is to not have people to hate your music and we want them to enjoy it. Another reason i want to be a singer with stella is because we want to be singers for a while and now we are working on writing songs together. My other reason i want to be a singer when i grow up is because me and stella want to get into the finals and singer to famous people and meet them. My last reason i want to be a singer when i grow up me and stella want to make it possible to be singers when we grow up. That is how we are going to make it possible and this is what i want to be when i grow up.
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stella
1/31/2017 12:29:31 pm
good job!
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Tyrell
2/5/2017 10:54:13 am
Good job
Savannah
1/30/2017 04:12:12 pm
When I grow up I want to be a chef. I have been cooking sence I could walk. Every time I go to a resteront I look closely at the food and take nots how they cooked it. My mom and dad give me tips on how to be a better chef. One day when I grow up I want to open a restaurant called savannah's bar and grill. I like to make my own food and normally they come out good. I know I'm a good chef and I want to show it to the world. I really think that being a chef suits me because the kitchen is my wonderland. I really want to be a chef and that's how I'm getting ready to be one.
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Nick
1/30/2017 04:34:15 pm
My career goal is to be a professional gamer after I graduate college. I can be a professional gamer by practicing. I want to be a professional gamer because I love to play video games. I play video games like Mario Bros. Sometimes I play video games at my friend's house. I play video games every single day. I play video games with my family too. This is why I want to be a professional gamer when I grow up.
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Alanna
1/31/2017 05:10:03 am
My career is to be a baker with savannah.I want to go to cupcake wars with savannah so we can show of our baking skills and so we can win.Our cupcake bakery is called carazy cupcakes we make all kind of cupcakes.We are going to make cupcakes for the rest of our life and after we are done with making cupcakes we are going to make other stuff to.We are going to have pastry's donuts cheesecake cake all those good sweets.Our bakery is going to be the best bakery out of all the bakery's in New england.Savannah and I are going to be famous for our cupcakes and we are going to be amazing and go to cupcake wars again so we can win.That is why I want to be a baker with savannah.
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savannah
1/31/2017 06:28:20 am
good job Alanna
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Lily :)
1/31/2017 06:34:29 am
When I grow up I want to be a professional dancer. I want to be a dancer because threw dancing you can express many feelings. There is many different types of dance. My favorites are Jazz and Contemporary. Ways I will achieve this goal is by practicing and working hard. I've already made it as far as my dance studios competition team. I have been dancing since I was five. This is going to be an amazing journey!
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SOPHIA (:
1/31/2017 06:59:07 am
I would like to be a backer and be on cupcake wars and be on the kids backing champinonchip. and open up my own cupcake shop that is called pusheens cupcakes with my own pusheen mascot.also i would like to be a profesh dancer right now i dance at SOSD shanon O'brin school of dance.and i am working on my aireial and roundoff backhandspring.and i would like to go on the copotition team.and last time i went to dance i almost got my arieal on the tumble track but i fell.that is what i would like to be .
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ISABELLA
1/31/2017 07:01:32 am
When i grow up i want to be a doctor. This is how i'm going to make it happen. First i'm going to go to school for 4 years. I think i'm going to learn to do CPR. Only if i need to. Then i'm going to be like a traner for like 2 years . I don't know if I want to work in a doctors office or in a hospital. When i'm down with school I can finily be a doctor
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Ciara
1/31/2017 07:21:44 am
When I grow up I want to be a veterinarian.I am going to school for 4 to 5 years or so but I don't know what collage I am going to I am still working on that.The reason why I want to be a veterinarian is I love all diffrent kind of animals so im not going to be a zoo keeper I know that.When I go to the pet doctor I see all the dogs and cat and I want to help them and when I droped off my dog I saw a kitty with only one leg so I want to help all the animals and try to do my best.School is my only chance to fix this I need good grades so I can get into a good collage.I want to get this job If I don't get the job at one place I will go to the other and I am not giving up on this job I really want it.And you never know if it would be fun or not.Also I want a collage that I can stay there for day and night to keep on practicing to get the job.When I get into high school I would try to practice my dog breeds Because I only know some.But also I want to be a famous gymnast I am going to be both at the same time I know I can get the time write so I can do both everyone can try more than one thing at the same time.That is why I want to be a Veteriniran
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Diego
1/31/2017 07:24:13 am
When I grow up I want to become a basketball player. And the reason I want to be a basketball player is because I am super tall and I can handle a basketball and shoot a basketball. But to do that life career I have to be good in school and get good grades. So I can go to college and become a professional basketball player like Michael Jordan and Stephen Curry. Those to amazing basketball players worked hard and now Stephen Curry is best in the league because Michael Jordan retired. And when you are a basketball player you have so many fans that want to be exactly like you. And when you shoot a basketball and make it in it feels amazing. Your teammates start cheering for you when you make a winning shot or something. This Is what my life career is going to be like. Thank you for listening.
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Carter :)
2/5/2017 06:47:25 am
My career goals are… First I want to go to Boston College for 4 years and play football. Then I want to go to the NFL combine as a QB and the teams I want to be on are the patriots or the cowboys. If I don’t make it on a team maybe a team will get me as a free agent. If not I want to own a arcade because in Warwick there are none and I like arcades because they're fun. At the arcade I will have a little bakery for my sister because she wants to be a baker with me at the arcade. If not a arcade I will probably work at Dave and Busters, work at Disney world, or a gym teacher. Those are my career goals.
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Joshua
2/12/2017 06:42:08 pm
Good job
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Joshua :)
2/5/2017 08:27:20 am
I want to be a police officer when I grow up because I want to help people. I think it will be fun to ride in a police car. There are very,very cool gadgets. It will be hard to achieve my goal but I have to try. I will exercise, practice, and work hard. I will go to a really good college study hard, learn all the laws,and do the best I can. I want to be like all the other police officer that help people. That's why I want to be a police officer.
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Tyrell
2/5/2017 10:51:46 am
My career goal is to be an NFL player. The team I would like to play for is the New York Giants. I would like to be on the New York Giants because they are my favorite team and I love to play football. Not only do I like the New York Giants my dad likes them too. My favorite players on the Giants are Odell Beckham Jr and Eli Manning. I want to go to Florida State University for college football. When I go to the FSU football games with my step-dad I see all of the big football players and I wan't to be big like them. My step dad loves Florida State college football, he grew up in Florida. My Step-dad wants the best for me. That is why I am trying to do my best in football and school so I can make it to the NFL. I am going to try to push myself as hard as I can to succeed. This summer I am going to football camp at Bryant College for five days and four nights. Next year I am going to football camp in Florida. Thank for letting me share my career goal with you.
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Ms. Moran
2/6/2017 06:25:25 am
I read your blogs every week but don't always comment. These posts were excellent!! I loved reading about your dreams, future goals, and how you plan to get there. Nice job!!
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matthew
2/6/2017 09:00:25 am
My career is to be a police because it is a big responsobilotey.Also
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Edward
2/7/2017 04:33:21 am
When I grow up I want to be a engern my job is to graw plans to make or upgrade buildings,planes,trains,cars,and space craft craft they can make also Engineers can make high tech buildings and Planes Trains so the possibilities are endless for an engineer imagine buildings millions of feet tall trains about a mile long and planes that can fly any without fuel so I said engineering is fun but it's also hard work so if you want your goal you have to work hard to it.
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Jonathan
9/12/2017 02:19:03 pm
i want be be a vet when im older so i can save lives of sick animals
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