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Sophia A
9/19/2017 01:25:44 pm
Me and my mother went apple picking, and my mom said "Sophia want to pick that apple over their" and she pointed at the biggest tree and it had the juiciest, most ripe and biggest apple ever. "sure mom i said" i jumped and ran and ran and jumped nothing happend. "MOM!!!!!!!!!" I said "yes?" she said "i need help". She got mad "YOU NEED THE LADDER!!!!!!!"." OK" I screamed across the orchard. I picked the apple and i took the biggest bite ever and I loved that apple like i love my dog. i went and picked more apples like that and it took forever, about an hour and a half . after we we were done we went home.
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Jose
9/19/2017 01:50:19 pm
My aunt and I went Apple picking on a nice day, I saw the biggest appletree. I told my aunt Jen I wanted to climb it to get the biggest red Apple on the top. she told me i can just be carefull. I climbed to the top and grabbed to big red apples for me and my aunt. We ate it on the ride home with big smiles. It was the best apples ever!
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Kenzie Ellis
9/20/2017 12:25:41 pm
Once upon a time, there was a little apple tree. Everyone loved the little apple tree. The town’s men turned the tree area into a park. The apple tree did not like that so the tree became evil. One day a little girl was wandering around the park and was very hungry. She took an apple and ate the apple. Three minutes later the little girl became a mean nose picking apple tree. This went on for years. By the year 2040, there was 3 million mean apple trees maybe even more and a whole bunch of missing people. Now I will tell you how it really happened. There once was a man named Ricegum. Ricegum seemed very nice man but he was actually a evil wizard who cursed all the apples that were growing. He took all the seeds out but 1 and turned himself into a evil tree. Everyone who ate an apple turned into an evil tree.
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Tessa
9/20/2017 12:52:05 pm
One day I went to the park and soue a apple tree.It was srand I never soue this there?But there were...EVLEapples!!!! I ran and ran and ran! Wen I got on a bout thay stop.There wenes is water?I sleep on the bout last night.In the moreing I filled a sperabat with waer and wen I got back,but thay chast me I serad thewater on them and they were god.
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Dariel
9/20/2017 12:59:50 pm
This story is about a boy named Josh and his dog Peaches that were taking apples from a near by apple orchard that did not belong to him lets get started.Josh:Peaches come on were so close to the delicious apples.Peaches:Bark.Moments later they arrived at the orchard.Josh:Here Peaches this for you,and one for me.Peaches and Josh:Crunch,Crunch,Crunch.Orchard owner:Stop right there.Josh:Peaches RUN.Then winter came Josh and Peaches didn't have no food so they ask the orchard owner to feed them so the owner said that they had to do chores around the house and they said yes and the lived happily ever after.The End
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Hayden
9/20/2017 03:44:57 pm
Me and my mom went apple picking. We found a small apple tree with only two apples left. That made my mom upset, because she likes to make apple pies. Then me and my mom went home and then ate both of the apples. Then we went to the store to get apples to make apple pie.
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Ethan C.
9/23/2017 04:27:45 pm
Once me, my mom, my brother and his mom and some of my brothers moms friends went apple picking. We got out of the car and ran to get the baskets and I fell Lol and everybody laughed. We climbed up the trees. .The apple orchard had samples of apple pie, it was so good. Then we finally went apple picking and I saw a huge apple and the juice was dripping it looked so good. I had to get a ladder and I saw the most rare apple ever.
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Christopher Rodrigues
9/24/2017 09:52:02 am
When I was in first grade, I went to Randall Holden School. My teachers were Mrs. Brearly and Mrs. Yarnell. In the fall, we took a field trip to Jaswell Farm. We took a bus all the way to Smithfield. My dad was a chaperone on the trip. Since he is so tall, he helped me get apples high up in the apple trees. We picked lots of apples together. I tried to bite one, but I was missing both of my front teeth at the time, so I couldn’t. Even though I couldn’t eat the apples, I still had fun on the field trip. I hope I can go apple picking again some day.
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Brady Amaral
9/24/2017 03:30:09 pm
One fall day my mom took me apple picking. There were apples everywhere some were green and some were red. We picked a huge basket full of big red apples. Then we went home and cut the apples and made pies, and left some for me to have for snack at school.It was a fun day.
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audri canfield
9/24/2017 03:58:35 pm
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Ethan
10/1/2017 12:30:23 pm
That's not what we were supposed to do Audrina
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Kayley
9/24/2017 04:49:05 pm
One day me and my family went to a local apple orchard. The orchard had so many different apples, like Macintosh, Cortland, Macon and even Honey Crisp. At first, we looked for the Honey Crisp. They are my favorite kind of apples. I reached for my first apple and a big bee landed on my hand. I was scared at first, but it did not sting me. When we left I saw honey sticks, so I asked my dad if I could try some. My dad said yes and bought me one. The honey sticks were delicious. I had a great day at the apple orchard.
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Jah'niece
9/25/2017 06:01:18 pm
One day my mom took me and my sister apple picking. When we got there it was really windy and it was blowing me and my sister all around. We finally made it to the store that looked like a farm. We went inside and my mom talked to the lady by the chair. We had to get our own bags and walk down a long trail. We stopped at many trees to pick the right apples. When we were finished we went home and made apple pies.
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